A Dance with Dragons - Review

I often find that while I'm often initially very enthusiastic about something, this tends to wane over time due to contemplation, further experience and discussion. This is something of an abnormal attitude on the internet where people always seem to be 100% assured of their own opinion and can rarely be dissuaded, but I think it's helped me organise my thoughts better; there are a great many people more eloquent and observant than I am after all.

With that in mind, here follows my review of George RR Martin's A Dance with Dragons, the fifth book in his A Song of Ice and Fire series - written significantly after release so I've had time to marshal my thoughts (and forget some, like as not). I've kept it as spoiler-free as possible, due to many people being introduced to the series through the show.

For some fans, it has been a five year long wait for this book. I can count myself lucky; I started the series late last year and was unable to bring myself to finish the fourth book until earlier this year, shortly before the show started. DWD had a lot riding on it – it had to make up for A Feast for Crows’ departure from familiar characters and environs, move the story forward (the period covered in four and five was originally planned to be a time skip until Martin realised that there was too much that would need explaining) and justify the long wait.

Unfortunately, it doesn’t quite manage to fully accomplish any of these tasks. It starts off very well and has some genuinely excellent moments throughout, but for most of the middle it gives the feeling of not progressing. The ending is somewhat typical Martin shock fare, though by this point we’re rather accustomed to it and cannot get into it too much in any case, as unlike the events in the previous books we don’t get follow-up chapters that show the fallout, so the outcome remains ambiguous. With the bait-and-switch having been used too much, it’s hard to do much more than roll your eyes, especially with how long it took the instalment to come out. That said, Martin ending it as he did shows a certain confidence that he can release the next book in a timely manner, and a commitment to continuing on his current track.

A personal factor for me is that I find it hard to form attachments to Martin’s characters. Atypically, it’s not to do with the fact that they are underdeveloped; rather, it’s because the surviving cast have been through so many hardships that have changed them for the worse. Indeed, one of the main perspectives in DWD was so embittered by the events of A Storm of Swords that I couldn’t enjoy his chapters, despite him formerly being one of my favourite characters.

Structurally, DWD has three “main” perspectives who get the lion’s share of appearances, with the rest of the cast generally having two to four chapters each. The cast of characters covered totals an impressive sixteen, though some make rather a better showing of it than others. Of the four (if I recall correctly) new perspectives, while they all move the story forward only one I feel truly acquits himself well; of the others one is relatively dull despite being of significant import to the game of thrones, the thread introduced in AFfC is uninteresting and concludes in a disappointing manner, and one actually damages the mystery surrounding the character.

My biggest issue with DWD is that so much of the focus is away from the location we’ve invested the most time in and care about – much of the book is concerned with Meereen rather than Westeros and the Wall.

DWD is by no means a bad book, but when held up against the events the first three and the change in tone of the fourth book, it feels very lacking. It returns to many of the perspectives we last saw in a Storm of Swords and attempts to continue their story, but save for a few core arcs a lot of it feels superfluous, as if the story is treading water. It's a shame as I felt that it started very well; it's just that after the impressive beginning not much happens until the end. There's also the fact that after several thousand pages I'm rather used to Martin's tricks, so something that might have shocked or had me gripped before instead causes me to roll my eyes.

I also think it suffers from rather too much fan-pandering.  There was also one character who showed up quite literally for a single chapter only, and did nothing save acknowledge some setup from AFfC. That said, many of returning cast of characters were a treat to read, doing rather more with their handful of characters than the big players did with their many.

Something worth noting is that Martin's writing style feels as if it has changed slightly; some dialogue feels more modern and he rather overuses repetition of key phrases and certain words, which took me out of the experience a little whenever it cropped up. His world-building remains as strong as ever though, with the descriptions of food still bordering on pornographic.

All in all, Dance is one of the weaker books in Martin's series, and frustratingly ends just as it feels as if things are about to pick up. All this is understandable when you take into consideration the fact that it was meant as a transitionary book, but this is scant comfort when you're left wanting more at the end.