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Thursday, 12 October 2017

The Fog Feeder

This poor blog has been neglected a little while; I've mostly been writing by hand in notebooks or on Drive. Still, I thought I should share a (more or less) complete short story I wrote a little while ago based off a writing prompt. Enjoy!




A figure stood amidst swirling fog, musing to itself. The most fascinating thing about people, it pondered, was how quickly they could adapt to new norms, how swiftly they found justifications. Fewer sheep went missing now, they said. There were fewer accidents, and people were no longer dependent on their old unreliable boilers and generators to provide for the lengthening nights. And what did they owe the Crown, or any strangers?
Ignored by the Throne and their neighbours, it had been simple to feed off their bitterness, and grow. The detractors were few and far between; older townsfolk who complained that the factory blocked their view of the river, or those who awoke in the middle of the night to a low, persistent thrumming that seemed to resonate through the earth. Almost all accepted these things as small prices to pay. That had been enough to capitalise on. And soon...
*
The lone rider paused briefly at the top of the valley, halting her horse to look down at the town nestled at the bottom. By all accounts she shouldn’t have been able to see it at all. It was late in the afternoon on a clear-skied but crisp mid-autumn day - typically the whole valley would have been blanketed in in a deep fog. She lowered the hood of her cloak, revealing bronzed skin, tight curls and piercing deep brown eyes. She surveyed the landscape briefly before reaching into her inside breast pocket to pull out a small pair of binoculars. The instrument was unornamented but clearly of expert craft, and sunlight glinted off its surface as she used it to look down at the town.
A slight adjustment of the lenses brought things into focus. Should could just about make out some tiny figures attending to various tasks, but her attention was immediately drawn to the monolithic bulk of a factory situated just on the river bank. It stood out even at this distance – up close it would make for an imposing sight, a colossal edifice of stone and steel. Her mind supplied imagined sounds and smells; the hissing, churning, grinding apparatus of heavy machinery and the acrid smell of heat and smoke. Three huge chimneys jutted into the sky, but nothing emanated from them. It seemed that the factory lay dormant, for now.
She frowned. Looks like the flyover reports were right, she thought. The factory was on no existing map or plan of the town, and certainly hadn’t existed the last time an inspection had been conducted in this area. Presumably the inhabitants had hoped that, as a location of little importance, its presence would be overlooked indefinitely. Unfortunately for them, nothing escaped the Crown’s notice for long, and she was here to get to the bottom of things.
‘Well, at least this means this journey won’t have been a waste of time,’ she thought as she put away the binoculars. She had been openly reluctant to take the assignment, the trip had been dull and she'd expected a false alarm. While this meant that there might be danger ahead, that was by far the preferable outcome. With a faint grin playing about her lips, she urged her mount down the steeply sloping hillside path, cloak cloak waving behind her in the gentle breeze.
By the time she arrived in the town the sun had sunk much lower in the evening sky, almost dipping behind the surrounding hills. It had been atypically clear for this time of year, but she was just glad she hadn't had to coax her horse – who had a bad habit of becoming recalcitrant at the worst times – through the dense fog the area was known for. She had passed some shepherds on her way down and had affected an air of affability, waving a greeting. This had been met with silent mistrust and thinly veiled hostility. She let her hand fall back to the reins. As you like it then, she thought, with a shrug. She kept her eyes to the road and did not greet anyone else; suited her just fine.
Her horse slowly cantered towards the centre of town, scanning the surrounding buildings for likely places to spend the next few nights until her business was done. There were more people in the streets now, and even a few other riders. They masked their suspicions better than the shepherds had, and she returned their curt nods with amicable ones of her own. It wasn’t surprising that she was attracting a lot of attention; despite being a stubborn old thing her horse was an attractive bay over 15 hands tall. Most of the other riders were atop creatures that would barely qualify as nags back in the capital, scrawny things struggling under the weight of their saddlebags, or else old workhorses pulling heavy carts.
Proceeding along the main thoroughfare, the rider eventually arrived at what passed for the town square. She was somewhat surprised to see that the town hall had been done up in a fairly passable recreation of the capitol’s style - they’d had to do without the limestone façade, of course, but the building looked suitably stately. She rode right up to the foot of the steps, dismounted and waited patiently, the faint smile returning to her lips. This part was always fun.
She didn't have to wait long. A short, harried looking man with pince-nez spectacles and thinning hair emerged from within and made his way down the steps towards her. An elegant silver sigil pinned to his lapel – a twin to the one she herself wore, and something of a contrast to his shabby suit – marked him as the town’s duly appointed mayor and the capital’s representative out in this area. His eyes widened when he noticed her sigil and he quickened his pace down the large stone steps. She smiled thinly in his direction and held out her hand.
“Welcome to our fair town!” he said in a clear voice, with an expansive manner that seemed very at odds with her initial impression of him. Mentally shifting gears from imperious to genial, she broadened her smile. He grasped her proffered hand in both of his and pumped it up and down effusively. “I do apologise for the lack of a welcome, I had no idea we were to expect a visitor from the capital! Your name, miss…?”
“Madame Gracie Lapin,” she replied, ever so slightly emphasising the honorific. It was one of her favourite aliases; she wore it more comfortably than she did her real name.
“Madame Lapin, a pleasure,” he said with a bow (to his credit, he rallied well). “I am Mayor Archibald Forthwright. Might I ask what has brought you so far from home? I’m afraid you’ve caught us quite unprepared!”
“I serve at her Majesty’s pleasure, of course,” said ‘Gracie’, giving a slight bow of her own. “It’s hardly a matter of great import, certainly not one to warrant a grand welcome! I am a Royal Cartographer - one of the Queen’s scouts happened to mention a discrepancy in our records and I was sent to document it.” She gestured carelessly towards the factory, stealing a glance at Archibald as she did so. He had visibly relaxed when she'd given her role (as if an Enforcer would announce their presence, she scoffed inwardly) but tensed up again at the stated purpose of her visit. It was ludicrous really; the building was a hulking monstrosity, towering well above every other building in the town save the clock tower, its long shadow reaching almost to their feet. One couldn’t help but notice it – indeed, it demanded attention. Still, it wouldn’t do if the mayor took it upon himself to become an obstacle.
Truth be told,” Gracie continued, almost shyly, “I’m something of a meteorologist buff and amateur painter. I was fascinated by the tales I heard of the dense fog in this area and was hoping I’d be able to capture something of its ethereal quality on canvas, however...”
“Hoho, well now! Sorry to say but we’ve been experiencing a spell of uncommonly good weather this past year. Barely more than a morning mist these days.” Archibald was eager to take the opportunity to divert discussion away from the factory, she noted. Interesting.
“I see…such a shame,” she said, injecting a note of dejection into her voice, while looking away lest he catch her trying not to roll her eyes.
“Having said that… I do know a place or two with some stunning views of the town. Quite a sight at sunrise, I daresay it would make for a spectacular painting.”
Was he… flirting with her? That was unexpected. Perhaps he had an agenda of his own? Still, she mused, this might work to my advantage… She raised her gaze and met his eyes.
“That sounds wonderful Mayor Forthwright!” she took a step towards him, then winced. “I’d be grateful if you could take me some other time however, it’s been a hard few days' riding.”
“Goodness me, where are my manners! If you’ll follow me, I’ll see to it that you’re set up in our finest inn and your things are properly taken care of. And please, call me Archie.”
He flashed her what he must have thought was his most winning smile. Lady preserve me.

*

‘Gracie’ allowed herself a brief moment of respite to collect her thoughts – it had been an educational evening. Forthwright had been true to his word and escorted her to pleasant and well-furnished inn just outside the town centre. She had offered to pay – as a formality, of course – but the mayor had been appropriately insistent. The modest luggage she had been able to fit into a few saddlebags had been brought up to a well apportioned room and a hot bath run for her. She had luxuriated in it for a good while, relieving her body of the aches and pains, before changing into a simple yet elegant dress to meet Forthwright for a late meal.
Conversation had been dull, but fortunately the food had been a pleasant distraction – she had patiently listened to him witter on about things of little consequence, smiling often and saying little, for the better part of an hour. After a time she had gradually shifted discussion towards more official matters, finally broaching the subject of the factory. Though he had remained hesitant to discuss it in any great detail, Gracie gleaned that the proprietor was currently ‘away on business’ and that until his return an inspection of the property was ‘simply out of the question’. She had ended supper shortly after that.
“I should mention," Forthwright had added cryptically, after having escorted her back, “that the nights can get rather chilly this time of year. Please do make sure your windows are tightly shut - I’d hate for you to become unwell.”
She rolled her eyes recalling his feigned nonchalance. If her suspicions were correct, ‘unwell’ was a dramatic understatement. She sighed. It felt as though she’d been stuck fulfilling assignments like this one for an age; she longed for something a little more glamorous. At least this one’s a little more interesting than the last time I got sent to the arse end of nowhere. That one had been a false alarm, or near enough - gruntwork for a junior enforcer rather than someone of her experience.
Still, she had a job to do. She slipped off the bed and walked over to her luggage, selected the case that contained her cartography equipment and depressed two seemingly random points. There was a soft click and a hidden compartment opened up to reveal gleaming steel, polished rowan and burnished bronze. With the ease of the long-practiced, she swiftly assembled the component parts of her rifle (which she had named ‘Mythbuster’) and shouldered it before walking over to the window.
Gracie examined it carefully. She had already completed a sweep of the room for bugs and had found nothing, but the mayor’s remark warranted further inspection. She murmured quietly to herself as she ran her hands over the pane, sill and glass, but detected nothing out of the ordinary. She scanned the streets below to check that they was clear, opened the window wide and turned to look up towards the roof. Her third floor room provided easy access - she stepped lightly up onto the sill and swung herself up. It was, in fact, a little chilly, though her cloak shielded her from the worst of it. She unslung her rifle, laid it down beside her, brought out her binoculars and settled down to wait.
It was an eerily still night; all of the town’s inhabitants seemed sequestered in their homes, and the wind from earlier had died down. It wasn’t silent though – a persistent thrumming resonated in the air at a frequency that made her head ache slightly. It was, of course, emanating from the factory. She turned towards it; if something was going to happen tonight, the sinister building was bound to be the source.
Nothing happened for the first hour, or the second. Gracie focused on her breathing and, by degrees, was able to tune out the factory’s hum. In the third hour, a change in the air roused her from her meditative state. Fog suddenly surged forth out of the factory, venting from the chimneys and seeping through the imposing wrought-iron gates and moved swiftly to blanket the town. She watched in fascination – it appeared almost purposeful, with tendrils creeping ahead like ghostly fingers searching for something before the following wave enveloped everything. She felt a chill run down her spine that had nothing to do with the marked drop in temperature. The hunt began here.
A thought occurred to her and she slunk back to the other edge of the roof to glance down at the window she had left open. Sure enough, the tendrils reached for it, and, finding it open, surged in with something akin to glee. Momentarily however, presumably due to finding the room empty, the fog retracted forcefully and continued down its exploratory path, prodding and prying at locked windows and doors.
Well now, that is fascinating. It looked like the Mayor was somehow complicit, but that was beyond her remit. The fog appeared unable to rise to cover the rooftops; her vantage point was safe, at least for now. Icontinued to spread outwards, venturing further out into the valley. Some plaintive bleating and neighing rang out into the night as it passed over stables and sheep pens, suggesting the animals were aware of it. The fog seemed disinterested in them however, continuing without slowing in search of more interesting prey, venturing further out into the valley until the finger-like tendrils were grasping at the lip of the valley.
But not able to pass that boundary, she realised. Whatever thing that was fuelling this fog (and she had had her suspicions), there were limits on how far it could go. If it was drawing power from the sleeping residents however... She turned her attention back to the factory that stood at the epicentre of the fog and pulled out her binoculars. The fog's swirling and churning made it difficult to make anything out, however she waited patiently she waited, breathing slowed and barely moving, as the rime slowly crept across the lens.
Eventually, Gracie became aware of the fog receding as the sky brightened. It didn’t reverse backwards into the factory; instead it dissipated by sinking down into the earth. As it faded and the air cleared, she finally caught sight of something – a tall, humanoid figure stood behind the gates, its arms outstretched, the fog swirling all about it like a shroud. It remained obfuscated however, any distinguishing features masked by a thick cloud that still lingered.
She sighed in frustration. There were only a handful of possibilities she might be up against, but each one would require different countermeasures and preparation and she wasn’t going to spend any more time in this backwater town on reconnaissance than was strictly necessary. Time to take a risk.
She reached over and hefted Mythbuster with one hand, while the other reached behind her back into an ammo pouch around her waist. She withdrew a cartridge from the pouch and chambered it in the rifle, before bracing the stock against her shoulder and sighting down the scope to line up a shot.  The air around her crackled with power as she once again began muttering under her breath. She pulled the trigger.
An electric blue tracer raced through the early morning twilight, coursing a lightning fast - but deathly silent - line from her to her target, dissipating the fog as it surged forwards. It struck the creature centre mass, both eliciting a bloodcurdling howl and blasting away the obscuring mist . The shot hadn’t been intended to wound however, only to illuminate, and  it was more bewildered than injured - she watched in satisfaction as it cast about for its assailant, once again retrieving her binoculars for a better look.
At first she almost thought that her shot hadn’t worked, but then she looked closer - the creature was itself ill-defined; its outline blurred and its every movement left a shimmer in the air, like an afterimage. It was long limbed and angular - fully extended it would likely stand at over twice the height of a person, but it was hunched over almost on all fours. Malevolent intelligence glimmered in the dark pools of its eyes. A wight then. It pawed at its wound with a betaloned hand and sniffed the air, then a snake-like tongue flicked out of its mouth as it stalked back and forth behind the gates. She observed with great interest as drew the fog into its maw. As it sucked in the mist its wound healed, and before long it had reapplied its shroud. Once it was again obscured, it sent forth a few tendrils to seek her out. It was out of time however - the sun would be up soon, and like most of its kind its powers would be greatly diminished by day. It gave one last sniff and taste of the air, then slunk back into the shadows.
Gracie watched it’s retreat intently, confirming it was long gone before giving away her position. She had been sorely tempted to challenge it then and there, but given that it would be her first time going up against one of its kind, it would be dangerous to underestimate it. Now she knew what she was up against, it was time to prepare. She withdrew back to the side of the roof leading to her room and – after confirming that the fog was no longer high enough to pose a threat – swung back down into the room. She walked back over to her cases, selected a fine engraving tool disguised in plain sight as a cartography pen, emptied some unmarked cartridges out in front of her and began to carve.
*
“Mr Forthwright, good morning!” Gracie waved cheerfully as the red-cheeked mayor hurried towards her, two stocky and unimaginative looking fellows trailing shortly behind him. She stood just off to the side of the huge wrought-iron gates that barred entry to the factory. In her hands she held a pad of paper and a graphite pencil, and behind her trailed her horse, grazing at the tender shoots of grass by the river bank. She let them approach, waited for Forthwright to catch his breath and then, just as he was finished huffing and puffing and was about to speak, cut him off.
“I followed your advice and kept the windows in my room closed, but it was awfully stuffy - I woke up rather earlier than I am used to! I didn’t think it appropriate to bother you at such an early hour, so I decided to explore on my own. It may not be the spot you had in mind, but I was able to capture quite a spectacular sunrise nonetheless! I must say, it was most breathtaking - there were still tendrils of fog swirling about here and there (she saw him blanch), they seemed to have a mind of their own! I don’t think my painting does it justice, but here I have it here....” She broke the constant stream of words and turned her back to him to walk towards her horse. Momentarily stunned, the mayor shook his head as if to clear his head before opening his mouth to speak.
“Madame Lapin, please, you are trespassing! I must insist that you-”
“Insist?” She spun around on the heel of her boot, causing him to take a step back, and arched an eyebrow. “I beg your pardon?” Gracie let her tone grow icey and drew herself up haughtily - Forthwright continued to shrink back, retreating behind his two thugs who were themselves caught off guard. “Mayor Forthwright, might I remind you that I am a duly appointed surveyor of the Queen?”
“Ah no, of course… I didn’t mean to imply…”
“On Her authority I may go wherever I please. Out of respect for the arrangement between yourself and the proprietor I have not demanded entry, but be under no illusion - I have a duty here that I will Enforce one way or another. Do I make myself clear?” Forthwright visibly flinched; before he was able to stammer out a response, a clang from behind them made him jump a foot in the air. Gracie calmly turned as the gates slowly opened, the hinges groaning under their burden.
“Crystal clear madame!” A tall figure strode out through the gates, closing the distance between them in a handful of steps. Out of the corner of her eye Gracie saw Forthwright’s bodyguards close rank in front of him. Of course they hadn’t been to protect him from her - he was still under the impression that she was a harmless bureaucrat. She fixed the newcomer with an appraising look, her arms folded across her chest. The… ‘man’ was dressed in an almost dandy-like manner, wearing a pinstriped purple and black suit with tails, white gloves and a matching pocket square, and his jet-black hair was lightly tousled. He would not, she admitted grudgingly to herself, have looked out of place at one of Her Majesty’s more casual soirees.  He bore little resemblance to the creature she had seen the night before, but nevertheless there was something predatory about his movements that gave him away immediately.
They locked eyes - his were, unsurprisingly, a misty grey - and she forced a smile, for all that the same menace she had seen on display the previous night set her teeth on edge. He returned the smile, revealing a great many gleaming white teeth, and bowed in greeting.
“My sincerest apologies for inconveniencing you, ma’am. I am the proprietor of this facility; my name is Clover Drayton.”
She took his proffered hand to shake, and a shock of cold ran through her body even through the glove. She did not let it show. “A pleasure to make your acquaintance sir; I am Madame Gracie Lapin, surveyor to the Queen.”
“Ah, indeed - you are here to confirm that my factory meets regulations?”
“Amongst other things. Tell me; It was my understanding that you were out of town on business, how did you come to return so swiftly?”
“Ah yes, quite so. Truthfully I was already on my way back and fortuitously happened to intercept our mutual acquaintance Archie’s message!” He gestured at the mayor, who recoiled as if he had been struck. “Not wishing to inconvenience Her Majesty any further, I endeavoured to made the journey overnight.”
“A most admirable sentiment sir; would that all were so accommodating.” She did not turn around, but her tone was pointed enough that even the hired thugs snickered quietly. “Is that not dangerous though? I am reminded of a strange noise I heard in the night; it sounded like nothing less than a most terrible beast!” They locked eyes again, and she saw his expression freeze for a second.
“Aha, that may be so. I cannot say that I have encountered anything of that nature however!”
“Then perhaps it was just my imagination. Away from home, the mind does tend to linger on unknown terrors. Let us speak no more of it! To work then; will you permit me access to your most impressive factory? I am eager to complete my assignment.”
“Your enthusiasm does you credit, ma’am. Regrettably however, I fear that things are presently not sufficiently organised to expedite your task. Would you permit me another day to get my faculties in order? I am sure that it would be of benefit to you.”
Gracie frowned and cocked her head to the side, as if to consider his proposal, then sighed. “If you believe that necessary then I suppose it would be unreasonable of me to insist otherwise.”
“Capital! I shall make arrangements to get things in order. Shall we meet here, same time tomorrow?”
She nodded her assent, acknowledged his farewell bow, then turned to face the still cowering mayor.
“Thank you Mayor Forthwright; I will not be needing any further assistance from you,” she said archly. She brushed past the trio, her horse chomping on one last dandelion before moving to follow. Behind her, a great churning began to rise up from the factory, and plumes of steam began to issue forth from the triad of chimneys.
*
The creature was more excited than it had been at any point since it had devoured its brethren. It drained what little magic it could glean from the dull denizens of the town, and the bargain it had struck with that imbecile of a mayor meant a blind eye was turned whenever visitors were careless enough to leave their windows open, but it wasn’t nearly enough. The female from before had practically radiated energy - once it consumed her it would finally be able to break free of the valley’s confines.
Its fog normally blanketed the town; tonight it enveloped it. The tendrils were its fingertips, and, guided by its will, wasted no time in racing up the side of the hotel to the roof where it could feel her presence. It was faint - she must have done something to mask it, as she had before - but Sure enough. Borne by the fog, it willed itself to that location, materialising to strike the killing blow itself. It prowled close, tongue tasting the air and senses alert for any sign of trickery, then lashed out. It hissed in triumph as its talons connected, but the sound quickly took on a different cadence as it realised it had been duped after all; the claws rent nothing but cloth.
It immediately made to disperse, but before it could do so, searing white-hot pain scorched its back - with a snarl, it turned to the clocktower. As if to confirm, a shrill whistle rang out through the night from atop the tower - she was taunting it! Dissipating instantly, the wight urged its fog towards the tower’s base, drawing in the surrounding fog to heal itself as it did so. She had made a grave miscalculation - if it concentrated all its fog in one area then it would be able to reach her, and she would have nowhere to run.
As the wall of fog rolled towards her she seemed to realise her mistake - she began firing shots at random into the rapidly advancing cloud bank, but did no damage whatsoever as it was spread throughout. Emboldened, the creature surged forward-
Right over her trap. Gracie smiled in satisfaction as the fiend let loose another anguished howl as it came into contact with the hidden magic barrier she had constructed earlier in the day. Its otherwordly essence triggered a superheated reaction upon contact, scorching it and blasting away the creature’s concealment. She expelled the blanks she’d been firing to goad it into approaching, chambered some new cartridges and sighted down her rifle, waiting to see what it would do next.
The fog quickly encircled the tower and the creature sent out feelers, searching for a flaw in the barrier’s construction. Yeah, good luck with that. Eventually, realising that it was hopeless, she saw the creature materialise further back and hiss at her. She rolled her eyes; it was obviously a mirage. Honestly, for all that the creature had managed to acquire enough power to approach human intelligence, it still had a lot to learn about setting traps.
Eventually, it seemed to realise that it wasn’t going to goad her as she had it. The mirage vanished, then suddenly the fog surged back towards the factory. Not a trace of it remained in the rest of the town, but it swirled and churned about the factory and its grounds, the very picture of sinister purpose. As she watched, the gates and doors creaked open: admit one. Gracie smiled grimly. A challenge, was it? Very well. She lowered a rope and slid over the side of her perch to rappel down to the ground. As soon as she was through, the gate clanged shut behind her.
*
She was within its domain now; it could feel her. Out there its primal nature had taken over, but within the confines of these walls it was absolute ruler. A prison, perhaps, but one of its own creation. And soon, it would have no need of it. It had sought to begin by depriving her of her senses, but she moved purposefully, and it saw that her eyes flashed in the darkness like a cat’s. No matter; she was still its prey. It would wear her down.

It was strange, the lengths the creature had taken to accurately mimic a real factory. Gigantic conveyor belts and brutish looking machines loomed in the darkness, and the air was filled with the smell of oil and grease. Or… perhaps she had it backwards? The townspeople expected a factory, and consequently that was what had been conjured up. Her steps made no sound as she slowly explored the cavernous rooms, deadened as they were by the fog. It was so dense that an ordinary person would have been blinded, and her breath formed crystals in the air whenever she exhaled. It was thick in other ways too, almost cloying as it invaded her mouth…

It watched in satisfaction as she began coughing, panic flaring in her eyes. Realising her error too late, she whirled around as if to retreat to the exit, but only made it a few steps before falling to her knees choking. It closed in on her - warily, having learned its lesson from the previous traps - to decipher her next moves. She was furiously clawing at the ground, seeking to draw strength from the earth as its rivals had done, but this was its domain, and it was a creature of water and sky. In a final act of desperation she pulled out her hateful weapon, and it recoiled despite its safe distance and intangibility. She fired three shots; two at the ground and one at the walls, and it shuddered as the blasts rocked its lair and sapped its strength.
But the walls held, and she slumped to the ground in despair. Her lungs, desperate for air, sucked in the poisonous fumes and she hacked again, though weakly now. It could see that she was fading fast, reduced to crawling pathetically on all fours, trying to escape the very air itself. Moments later she collapsed. It wouldn’t do to let her expire through asphyxiation - too much of her magic would be lost. It materialised triumphantly over her collapsed form, reared back an arm and bared its teeth-

Gracie rolled away as the creature’s claws struck mere inches away at where she had lain, and brought the butt of her rifle up like a club, crashing into the side of its head. It howled in pain as the enchanted wood traced a line of fire across its face - and preventing it from turning back to fog.
“Gotcha,” she said, grinning fiercely, her eyes wild and aflame. She lived for this part. The wight snarled, its eyes brimming with hatred, and lunged towards her, claws outstretched. For all that her attack prevented it from fleeing, it seemed to have done precious little else. The creature was deadly fast, and she barely evaded its talons. She dropped the rifle - it would be of little further use in a melee - and struck out with her bare hands. It spun away, bemused at the change in tack, and she pressed her advantage lashing out and driving it back. It was thoroughly confused now; its poison had failed, it had been deprived of its magic and now even its natural weapons were proving ineffective? It leapt back to create some distance between them so that it could pounce once more, and-
“Whoops.” The moment it had created enough space, Gracie pulled a revolver from a holster hidden under her cloak and shot it square in the chest, blasting it off its feet and drawing a pained screech from the wight. She turned to reclaim Mythbuster before walking unhurriedly to where the creature writhed, no doubt in agony.
“Wait, please!” The plea came out garbled from a mouth half-full of razor sharp teeth, as it struggled to reform itself into the shape of Clover Drayton. Gracie looked the creature directly in its black eyes, and her face held no pity. She raised her rifle one last time, and pointed it at the creature’s head.
“Sorry Drayton; looks like you failed inspection.” She pulled the trigger, and the wight exploded in flame.
Gracie prodded at the scorch marks its expiry had left and snorted. Not much of challenge after all. Oh well. She hadn’t expected it to be taken in so easily duped; if that had been how it had won its previous victories, its other opponents hadn’t been up to much. Still, the degree to which the creature had been able to manifest as human was remarkable; perhaps if she’d been sent to investigate just a little later, giving it some more time to grow into a truly formidable opponent…
The walls around her began to shake; no longer sustained by the creature’s glamour, the entire edifice began to collapse. It would take years for the land to be able to recover the amount of natural energy that would be lost but, well, that wasn’t her problem. Sprinting back the way she had come, she burst out through the rapidly disintegrating doors into a feeble dawn obscured by the thickest fog she had ever seen. She could just about make out some figures approaching - likely Forthwright and his goons - but she had no intention of meeting him, her current stint as Gracie Lapin now at a close. All she had left to do was to write up the report and turn it in at the Agency - sorting out the mess was someone else's problem.
She whistled and her horse, who had once again been enjoying the riverbank grass, trotted over to meet her, already loaded up with her bags. She patted the horse absentmindedly, swung up into the saddle, and took a hold of the reins.
“Time to go,” she said, pulled up her hood, and left the town behind. She didn’t look back.
*

Monday, 4 March 2013

The Outsiders - Original Writing (complete)

2013- short story workshop (complete)

Here is the (more or less) finished version of the earlier short story I posted back in January under the working title "Shadow Chase". It's changed a fair bit, so you can go back and compare them if you like, but that was 1600 words and this is like 3800 so you have been warned :P


The Outsiders

I've always been able to see them. I found them frightening, at first. What child isn't afraid of things lurking in the darkness? One of my earliest memories is peering down at them from my bedroom, head barely poking over the windowsill. They were perfectly still, dotted at intervals along the street, illuminated by the moonlight. As I watched, they raised their heads as one towards my hiding place, as if sensing my presence. I dropped out of sight and stayed there on the floor until my heart stopped hammering enough for me to crawl back into my bed and hide under the covers.
They never appeared during the day; it wasn't until the sun went down that I'd start to see them out of the corner of my eye, just within visible range. No one else could see them; whenever I mentioned them to adults they'd always say that I had an over-active imagination. I thought that maybe it was something you grew out of, but I came to realise that other children couldn't see them either. That was the scariest part - having to deal with them alone.
After a while, however, I stopped being so scared of them. They only came out when it was dark, and they seemed to stay away from people; with rules like that, I figured that it'd be simple to avoid them. I even made a game of it for the playground - Shadow Chase, I called it. You split a group into three; one team representing the Shadows, as I had taken to calling them; a blindfolded team who could tag the Shadows to stop them, and a third team who could direct them while avoiding getting tagged by the Shadows. Like most kids' games, it usually ended up devolving into a mess of shouting, scrapes and tears.
That was how I first got to know Chris. We must have been around seven then; he was a quiet kid in one of the other classes so I'd never really spoken to him before then. I saw him watching us one day and asked if he wanted to play, on a whim. He listened as I explained the rules, eyes widening as I explained the teams. When I was done he asked, hesitantly,
'That sounds like a lot of fun... how did you come up with the idea?'
'Oh,' I'd said flippantly, too young to pick up on the cues, 'it's all real. The Shadows come out at night, but most people can't see them.' I'd started affecting a nonchalant tone any time someone asked me that question, as I had tired of giving the same response dozens of times only for it to get dismissed. Chris's reaction was anything but typical; his jaw slackened and his eyes widened even further.
'...You can see them too?'
He soon became my closest friend after that. More than anything else, we found it comforting to finally be able to share the burden with another person. It was a secret only the two of us knew about, and that was intoxicating. What had set us apart from everyone else brought us closer together; rather than being different, we were special. The Shadows were a constant topic of conversation with us, as we had no one else to talk about them with. We wondered what they were, where they came from, what would happen if they caught you. Shadow Chase games took on a special significance for us; it wasn't just play, it was training. We always said that if one of us got taken by them, the other would come to rescue them. In our minds it was as simple as that.

Despite being so soft-spoken most of the time, Chris loved football and could get really rowdy on the field. His dream was to play in the premier league some day, and he went to practice weekly at a club near his house to work towards that goal. He had the talent too - he was small and spry, quick on his feet and great at passing. One night three years after we first spoke, Chris never made it back home after football practice. The clocks had gone back an hour the night before so it got darker earlier; I guess that must have caught him out.
My form teacher told me that I had been called to the Headmaster's office the moment I stepped into class the next day. I was nervous, of course, but it didn't dawn on me why I had been summoned until I got there. When the door opened and I saw Chris's parents standing there, their faces haggard from lack of sleep and their eyes red and sore from crying, I realised immediately.
I remember everything about that office visit in excruciating detail - the broad expanse of his desk in front of me, the clatter of children filing into the building for registration, the smell of cut grass wafting in through his open window, the wooden armrests of my chair gripped tightly in my hands.
'Has Christopher ever given you any reason to believe that he was unhappy?' the headmaster had asked. 'Perhaps something that hinted he was planning on running away from home?'
'No sir,' I had squeaked out in reply. Had he shared any plans to that effect? Did I know anywhere he might be staying if that was the case? Would he ever follow someone he didn't know if they promised him something? The stream of questions seemed endless,  but I did my best to squeeze answers out of my increasingly tightening throat while Chris's parents looked on silently.
Eventually they decided that I didn't know anything, and the headmaster let me go. I made my way back to class, but when I arrived I could feel everyone staring and hear them whispering - word must have already gotten out. After a while it got so bad that I started to feel physically sick, and asked to be excused - I sat crying in a toilet stall until my mum was called in from work to pick me up, and didn't go back to school for some time after.
I couldn't sleep that night.  I tossed and turned for what felt like hours, until I eventually decided to go down to the kitchen to make myself a hot drink. The house was quiet - my parents had spent the evening being part of Chris's manhunt and had gone to bed early. That was probably why the drapes in our living room hadn't been drawn that night.
I found myself drawn towards the window, the street lights outside casting long shadows across the room. I walked right up to the glass and stared at the ghostly figures on the other side, and they stared right back.
There were dozens of them, all concentrated around my house. It was the first time I had ever seen them up close; they were human shaped and clothed in a hooded garment that obscured their faces, with a strange indistinct quality to them; a blurring around the edges. It seemed like all colour had been drained from them, and from what I could make out, their hooded faces were completely featureless.
Given what had just transpired that day, you might have expected me to be petrified. Normally I would have been - for all the bravado I displayed during the day and with Chris, alone at night I still felt as scared as I had been when I was younger. That night though, I was in a sort of trance. As I gazed at the crowd of blank, hooded faces, it gradually began to part to allow a single figure through. 
It was Chris. He was expressionless and dressed the same as the rest of them, but immediately recognisable and barely looking any worse for wear. I have no idea how long I stood there, staring, but once the shock wore off I raised a trembling hand and pressed it against the window. After a brief pause he did the same. I opened my mouth to call his name, but all that came out was a wordless croak.
I was so relieved to see him apparently unharmed that I mustn't have been thinking straight. He was right there, and he was okay! I remember running to the door to let him in, fumbling with the lock and throwing it open, but that's all. My parents found me there the next morning, passed out on the floor. By now I knew better than to say anything about the Shadows, but I still tried to tell them I'd seen him. Obviously they didn't believe me.

They never found a body, of course. It really messed up that family. Eventually they moved away;  I remember the look his mum gave me as their car pulled out of the driveway for the last time. The expression on her face was equal parts resentful, desperate, and pleading; begging me to tell her something that'd bring him back to her.  I never saw her again.
It messed me up too. For a while I had kept insisting that I saw him every night, kept trying to get anyone at all to look with me. After the initial grace period where they put it down to distress, they got tired of hearing me saying it. When my parents cautiously suggested that maybe I should see a psychiatrist, I shut up about it.
I withdrew into myself, after that. While I'd been away from school I had fallen out of contact with my other friends there, and when I returned I didn't bother trying to salvage the relationships; the solitude suited me just fine, and in my absence I had decided to go to a different secondary school than the one we had all planned on attending.
Every night, I'd wait by a window and watch the figures outside until he appeared. The total number of Shadows seemed to wax and wane, but he was ever present.  Over time, the palm on the other side of the glass shrank as I grew and he stayed the same. It became something of a nightly ritual, I guess. Even though I couldn't save him, I wanted him to know that I hadn't forgotten.

Still, I began to doubt myself - there's only so much you can take of people assuring you that what you can see with your own eyes isn't real before you start to think that you might be crazy. More than ever before, I became obsessed with finding out the secrets of the Shadows. Understandably, there wasn't a whole lot of literature on them, and what little existed was usually buried in old, obscure tomes, often written in other languages. If it wasn't for the internet, I would have been completely out of luck.
Over the next few years I slowly, painstakingly, accumulated as much knowledge from various sources as I could to learn as much as possible. I would head straight home and sit at my computer for hours on end, sifting through information, accepting the credible and discounting that which clashed with my own experiences, while the light outside my bedroom window ebbed away. They didn't show up on film, but I found a handful of artists renditions that more or less resembled the creatures I was familiar with.
I learned that the generally accepted term for them was 'Outsiders', though there was enough material referring to them as Shadows or Shades that I was grimly amused that so many scholars apparently had a child's creativity when it came to names. It derived from the fact that they were unable to enter human-built structures or even approach those unable to see them, as well as their ethereal appearance and the commonly held belief that they were the spirits of the dead.
Confusingly, I found that Outsider was sometimes also applied to those who could see them, as the ability set them aside from the rest of humanity. There were sightings of them dated as far back as Ancient Greece, but in all that time there were no recorded incidents of someone coming in contact with an Outsider and returning to tell the tale. There were a few fanciful tales from alleged witnesses who claimed to seeing victims dragged screaming down through the ground as if to the depths of hell, but I dismissed those outright. For one, being in the presence of an Outsider induced sleep, as I had found out first-hand; if the ground really did open up to swallow the hapless, at least they wouldn't be awake to scream. Telling myself that helped alleviate some of the guilt I felt over Chris.

At some point during all this, I stumbled across an internet forum that turned out to be a refuge made up of people who had suffered at the hands of the mysterious beings. It was a small community of only three or four hundred members, but very active and close-knit. Reading through the introductory posts sub-forum was like reliving my story with Chris but with some details changed each time - the loss of a child, a lover, a sibling.  The one that affected me the most had been one of the most recent at the time, written by a girl my age named Kelly. She wrote amazingly candidly about how she had lost her twin sister to the Outsiders, and how the resulting strife had led to her parents divorcing. When I registered the next day, she was the first person to comment on my post.
That community helped me come to terms with the fact that I wouldn't be able to rescue Chris. It was made up of people from all over the world, from myriad different backgrounds and walks of life but all drawn together by a shared experience of loss. It was like a support group, and we all helped one another. They helped me come back out of my shell a little, and encouraged me to make some friends at school. After all, they'd said, having someone to walk home with every once in a while wasn't a bad idea, especially during winter.
Kelly helped most of all. It's safe to say that I had a pretty massive crush on her; everyone on the board knew, and they teased us relentlessly about it. An older couple that had met on the board, Diane and John, constantly said how much we seemed like younger versions of themselves. Kelly took it all in her stride though; one of the things I admired most about her was how she never seemed to let anything faze her. We talked a lot about everything and nothing, first via private messages, then email, text messages, phone and video calls. I was cautious at first, afraid of messing everything up and losing the one safe haven I'd managed to find, but luckily she liked me back. One day, a few months after we had been dating like this, she made a suggestion.
'So... I was thinking,' she'd said suddenly, startling me. We often left our video chat clients running in the background while we idled on our computers; I had been focusing on some coursework and not paying attention to the window with her on it.
'Yeah?'
'I was thinking,' she said again, 'maybe I could come down to visit you? As a sort of belated birthday present kind of thing, y'know?'
I was ecstatic, but tried not to show it over the webcam. Co-ordinating the get-together proved tricky however; she lived a couple of hours away by train, so if we wanted to spend any real amount of time together she'd have to go back in the dark. After thinking it over, I decided to ask my parents if she could stay for the weekend. The request took them completely by surprise; she was the first person I'd wanted to have over since Chris had disappeared, and was a girl at that. They didn't take much convincing though. I hadn't done anything for my sixteenth, and they always liked it when I behaved 'normally' - though they were quick to stress that she'd be staying in the guest bedroom.
She came down the next week. It was incredible finally getting to meet her in person, and my parents took to her too. The first day she stayed over we stayed up well into the night talking, planning future trips, and - once my parents had gone to bed - fooling around. At one point she broke off from me, giggling, only to have the sound fade from her lips. I twisted to see what she was looking at; there was a gap in the curtains, and through it I caught a flash of a silver. I looked back at her, and sharing a look of mutual understanding, we got off the sofa and walked hand in hand over to the window.
The sight that met our eyes was stunning, eliciting a gasp from her. the street outside was filled with more Outsiders than either of us had ever seen - they must have been drawn in greater numbers because of the two of us together. The street shimmered as the moonlight reflected off their pale shrouds; it was eerily beautiful. I took a step forward and, when Kelly hesitated, squeezed her hand reassuringly until she joined me right next to the glass. The sheer number of featureless faces directed towards me was disconcerting, but soon enough there was the familiar ripple of movement as the crowd parted - and this time, two figures emerged from the throng. The smaller figure next to Chris was just as featureless as the rest of the crowd to me, but I could tell by the way Kelly was gripping my hand that it was her little sister.
I placed my hand on the window, and after another moment's brief hesitation she did the same. When her little sister mirrored the gesture it proved too much for her - she jerked her hand away from the glass as if she had been stung, backpedalled away from the window and collapsed to the ground, sobbing. I jerked the drapes shut and did my best to soothe her. When she had calmed down we agreed it was best to call it a night, and went to our - separate - bedrooms. We didn't speak of what had happened for the rest of her stay.

We continued seeing each other like that, making trips and spending a few nights each time, alternating between her place and mine. Save for the first night I spent at hers, I made a point never to check on Chris while with her. It made me feel weirdly guilty, as he was the one who'd brought us together in the first place, but Kelly's reaction to seeing her sister had been so strong that I knew it would be a bad idea. It had really surprised me, but I could understand; as close as Chris and I had been, it couldn't compare to losing your identical twin.
 We applied to all the same universities, and when we got our offers we immediately found a place together. Moving in was every bit as great as we'd hoped. We complemented one another perfectly; her boundless enthusiasm and spontaneity meant we were always trying out new things together, while my more reserved attitude reigned in some of her crazier, more reckless ideas. Those were the happiest days of my life - almost enough to make me forget about the spectre that had brought us together in the first place, if it wasn't for the ever present daily reminder of sunset.
Even so we made the most of it; we'd go out with big groups of friends so we'd always have someone to ward off the Outsiders on our way home, or, failing that, a place to crash for the night. I wasn't a big drinker; I worried too much about the logistics of getting us home, so I just let Kelly cut loose. I loved watching her like that, completely caught up in the moment and unburdened by worry or fear.
Whenever we got home on nights like that, I would quietly sidle over to the bedroom window so as not to wake her, and peer down into the streets below. Gazing down at the sea of upturned faces, blank as masks save for Chris's boyish features, it seemed impossibly long ago that they had taken him from me. In all that time, the only solution I'd found had been to hide from them. How long could it last? Thoughts like that kept me up well into the small hours, when the figures would begin to disperse, evanescent as a morning mist.

We kept the flat after graduating and found jobs nearby. Our social groups grew more disparate as we befriended colleagues, and even our after work time was affected by it. It was strange, not being with one another constantly; after so many years together Kelly's presence had become so familiar that it was almost like missing a limb. We made up for it on weekends though, reliving the early days of our relationship when everything was so new and exciting.
One Friday night, Kelly never made it back home from an after work get-together. It had happened before so I wasn't unduly worried at first, but after calling up her closest friends and the other usual suspects, I started to get frantic. I couldn't sleep that night, and when she still hadn't called home the next day I headed straight to the police station. There couldn't be a search like there had been for Chris, the officer had tried to explain, not unkindly. Adults went missing all the time and for all sorts of reasons; it would be impossible to cover them all.
'Don't worry,' she'd said, 'she'll turn up.'

That was a few weeks ago. The worst part was contacting our parents; my mum had really connected with her, and the look that Kelly's mother gave me when I told her that she'd lost her remaining daughter was an order of magnitude more heart-wrenching than the one Chris's mother had given me, all those years ago.
I decided against saying anything on the forum. It was supposed to be a place of solace, and I didn't want to ruin that. In the time that I'd been posting there, a number of regulars had quit - the fear that something had happened to them was always there, but went unsaid. In the end, I sent John and Diane a text letting them know what had happened, and said that they could share the information with anyone who cared to ask. I wouldn't be back.
I hope with all my heart that the reason Kelly disappeared is simply that she left me; that she found someone better, maybe even someone who could protect her from the Outsiders. Thinking that hurts, but it's better than the alternative. I make sure every curtain in the flat is tightly drawn before nightfall; I daren't look out of a window any more, for fear of seeing her looking back at me.